|Reviews for Anton sitting in the Doorway|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Beautiful. I love the first stanza the best, and your phrasing is so nice in this ("like a thrill of wind," "in the marrow of his eyelashes"). Lovely. Keep writing! :)
| amavian chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
amazing opening line. wow.