Sweet story! Poor Lucas! But I'm glad it had a happy ending :)

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Happy ending. Awesome.

Those jerks got what was coming to them. Hehe.

Awesome work.

The nerve of that woman...

-growls-

OMG! DUDE! Just leave the kid alone! D;

That's so wonderful of Zack to be so supportive!

I feel the love -hugs self-

I hope they get those bastards -_-

-heart stops-

O.O

A-HOLES!

GAH! -grumbles angrily-

Really good so far c:

O.o

Holy crap. That's awful!

Nhh!

Something is going to happen to the hoodie, huh?

Evil man -_-#

-sigh-

Hope he opens up. Sometimes...it really helps.

:/

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-covers mouth with hand-

Oh, fucker... jerk doesn't cover it.

-wipes tear from corner of eye-

Damn... wonderful.

I really liked the first chapter, but I was hooked from the second I saw "My Chemical Romance"

My absolute favorite thing/band ever.

awsome story!

This is really good, but I think you mixed up the attorneys in the court room. I'm assuming the attorney who asked Lucas if he loved his mother and if he was a homosexual was the attorney for the prosecution. The attorney on Lucas's side would actually be the attorney for the prosecution because his side is the side that is trying to get his mother and Matt put behind bars. The D.A., or Defense Attorney, would be the one on his mother and Matt's side because they're the ones that need to be defended. The D.A. wouldn't be the one objecting to Lucas being asked if he was a homosexual. )