|Reviews for Nature's Way of Creating Crossroads|
| Marie Berden chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I read only the first chapter so far and I think your writing has a good sense of suspense. However, your wording and sentence structure could use work. In the beginning, you kept starting your paragraphs/sentences with "the creature" this and "the creature" that and it definitely took away from the writing. Another thing is that if you made the ending more suspenseful, people would want to know more about what happens next.
| Dana S chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Is there a chapter two? because you've just got me wanting to know what happens! I advise you to finish this if you haven't because its very well-written! And your english is great, one or two mistakes but all in all brilliant! Keep it up!