Reviews for Beautiful Unreliable World
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
We all have our moments where we feel solitary in a 6/7 billion world filled with people.

But, there are beautiful people out there. You probably see them everyday, pass by them, and never talk to them. You don't know, maybe coming out of the shell one day would give you a lasting friend.

You're so bitter of friends, but that's perhaps because you haven't had any true friends yet-and when you would, you'd realize why everyone's looking for real friends.
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
I love this poem! It does potray to me a picture of modern day life.

I said I love it and I will say it again the last two verses are my favorites.

"Is this the wonderful world,

where backstab never fails to,

follow one who tries so hard,

to fight inhibitions and fear?"

When oh when will humans stop backstabing each other to work together for a better future?

"This beautiful place we call home,

where hope merely gets trampled on,

and emotions are often toyed with,

such life is too unreliable, no?"

This is the saddest of them all. For when I was kid growing up in Greece I recall being bullied and shunned to the point where my hope was trampled.

I saw this poem with a filter. The filter being my life. I apologize if any of the meanings were not of your own.