Reviews for Connectors
vigorouslydenyingeverything chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
Still too short...

And...

sorry to say this but...

it wasn't romantic to read...

though you are improving...

just a little adjustments on the grammar...

Good luck and update soon!
vigorouslydenyingeverything chapter 2 . 12/3/2010
Are these really something you made up? or you got it as an idea from something else?...

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Or did you copy some things about it..?

How can you possibly think of all of these?

I don't even know what the other things mean...

Anyway, nice chapter.. though it's still short...
vigorouslydenyingeverything chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Short but a good start. Though you have to make the summary a bit more interesting... Well, that's all i have to say!