Reviews for Midnight Drive
willshakespeare-immortalbard chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Whoa. Whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa.

That was awesome! Very nice-very dark. :)
Lula6791 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Oh my! This one shot is really good. One can feel the woman's pain and the man's fear, guilt and regret. The ending is just perfect. I like it.
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
You build up tension really well in this. Usually I prefer numbers to be written out, but using only figures in this is actually quite effective :)

One thing: "Why won't he say something the woman thought to herself." - this needs either a comma or a question mark to seperate the thought from the actual narrative.
radioactiveshnitzel chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
This was intense!