Reviews for Even the Slightest
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I loved this!

Yeah, we shouldn't disdain and belittle the little tokens that we show to others-we might see them as small but the recievers would appreciate it :D

Fave lines:

"Nothing in life,

that is positive,

will be neglected,

by a broken soul.

For it has undergone,

the toughest rainstorms,

with no shelter and warmth,

sorrowfully lonely, bitterly alone."
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Your poems are the ones I like the most!

"Maybe it will,

just be another,

shortlived joy,

but it is appreciated"

Trust is usually shortlived as it is crushed by the waves of betrayal.

When trust is established it is shaky however with the foundation of good actions. Trust will not longer be a shortlived joy.

The final verse says it all... My favorite verse.

"For it has undergone,

the toughest rainstorms,

with no shelter and warmth,

sorrowfully lonely, bitterly alone"

I feel we all have gone through this verse way too many times.

The world needs some sunshine!

Can't wait for more of your work!