Reviews for Me, The Supernatural
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 8 . 4/28/2012
amazing story!

I didn't really understand the note. Will you update this story again?

Tarah xXx
NinaMarieee chapter 8 . 7/3/2011
This story has so much potential, i don't know why you would not continue, i was excited to read it, but then you said you were going to stop, very disappointing.
x-128-x chapter 7 . 5/16/2011
This was a good chapter, but a few bits were slightly confusing, like the random flashbacks. I like the idea but maybe you could explain it a bit more?

Also, your story is up twice, you need to delete the first version. If my comment comment doesn't apply to the second version then sorry, i didnt have time to read the improved version
OneDayJobbiesWillRuleTheWorld chapter 6 . 5/14/2011
CHLOE ! WHERE is the next chapter ! PLeAASee pretty please upload it tomoroooo ? HEEEHEEEE. Your story is so amazing :E and i cant wait for another cella ( IT IS SO PRONOUNCED CHELLA)and seth scene :E heeeeeeheee . And when is luke coming In? Upload it tomoz, or i shall shoot you :)

PS please give me some money when you are a famous author and i am slamming random keys on my unbelievably out of tune piano :) ( and being a muppet ) oh oh oh , and CHLOE this review better upload to fiction pressor me me is not going to be very happy :(

Anyway people is going to be thinking i am a bit strange arent they chlooos the chlooos.




from a little jobby
Cecily Mitchell chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
The story is good. Very interesting... my only suggestion at this juncture would be to go back and separate with a line or some sort of design or extra spacing parts that skip time. For example you have this one part where Cella makes a comment. The next part is at lunchtime. The lack of continuation made it hard for me to follow the story the way you envision.
Loony-bin Escapee chapter 5 . 1/17/2011
Wah! It took you so long! I was so bored. I was losing hope, but your story was just so good that I had to keep checking to see if it updated. I really hope you update sooner than it took this time. It'll make me cry if you don't; so for the sake of complete stranger's already precariously balanced sanity please review soon. I am sure many of your readers will want you to as well, so my hope is not entirely out of the question.
Emmaa x chapter 5 . 1/7/2011
Amazing :D I really like the style you have written it in

please update soon :)
loudlittlefreak chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
hi got fiction press so i could review ur story! :)

plus i do correct ur spelling mistakes and all that jazz. i've sent u chp 1 and 2 u need to send me "flying" ok? and i will nag u at school to update :D
anonymous chapter 4 . 10/11/2010
Wah! Now I have nothing to do! You have to update soon or I might cry or even go insane! Update, update, update.
anonymous chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I think you had an awesome idea, but it was kind of hard to understand. You have got to watch spelling and homonyms. Punctuation is important too. Other than that, it was awesome!
The Gairy Fodmother chapter 2 . 8/22/2010
Really, really good I love how you write, how its the character who tells the story, and not the author.

Please update soon :D
darthmarth chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This is pretty awesome. Update soon.