|Reviews for The Race|
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Very good. I enjoyed reading this and the suspense held me to the very end. I love the line: "you don't have to run fast-just faster than the guy behind you." Beautifully practical and ironic.
I saw only one small typo: "The stream itself was too strong to we waded throught."
| pappimaster chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I must congragulate you on this. Zombie stories are hard to write but this isnt bad, i especially like the last lines "I'm sorry Keagan. I love you. But tonight, I'm glad you were slower." The only problem i have is the reference to the body coming up from graves is seems to stereotypical and unrealistic (which i know is ironic considering it a story about a zombie apocalypse). Other than that its pretty good. I know a lot of people dont appreciate short stories or excerpts but i do and i like this one.