Reviews for Turning
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
loved the last stanza. true :)
Kader Gwyneth Marque chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I'm finding it very difficult to choose a specific part of this poem I can say is my favorite; it's just wonderful. The poem as a whole skillfully pulls you in and then completes itself in a very timely manner that just makes it sound so simple, yet complex. A great piece.

Cheers,

K.G Marque
lymli chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
that's sad when a pretty world is just in mind.
Slaaty chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This is gorgeous! And amazing considering there were two authors... it honestly sounds like one smooth voice.

I think the only thing I would change would be to create a uniform structure. If you guys were feeling up to the challenge.. maybe try threading the stanzas together using the concept of "turning"?