|Reviews for Almost Lover|
| HeyyyitsPickle chapter 5 . 8/31/2010
So i find this story funny but cool :)
and just to let u know...I LOVE Chicken n Rice from Halal Stands. hahaha
Next time get Chicken over rice with hot sauce, white sauce, and pita bread...unless thats how u get it already? haha.
anywayss... love the story. update soon? ;)
| lovelymatthew chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
yay update! about the cliffhanger... did not see that one coming! but i think trey will give louise a chance seeing as she is obviously somewhat interested... but he will always be wondering what woulda/coulda/shoulda happened if the right girl had received and responded to his note and while louise will probably end up falling in love with him, there will always be pain in her heart because she will never be #1 in trey's eyes
| beverlyamethyst16 chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
ha ha :) funny!
| nothingXpersonal chapter 4 . 8/24/2010
Awe wrong girl! Maybe she can help Trey find the girl he WAS looking for in exchange for a place to sleep (because personally I would know be afraid that people would watch me when I slept) and then they end up fallin in love:) that'd be cute! Update soon
| MayaD chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
1. boy watching her sleep - OH HELL NAW I want some more juicy details about creepy stalker boy. I hope he's delicious! :D
2. Donovan... I hope that... well really I hope there is a whole mess of drama :) I loved this bit with the hair and memory of kiss and errthang.
:D excited for morree
| Kate chapter 3 . 8/20/2010
lol i'm not sure if i really like donovan that much. but other than that, i really like your story so far. update please!
| GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
This is great, it's really capturing my attention, but (yup, there's a but. Here comes the grammar lesson! xP) next time, don't use fullout CAPS lock, because it's well, sorta incorrect to use it like that. If you want to emphasize stress, anger, etc. in a sentence or word, you put it on italics. And when you write numbers down, write it verbally. e.g: "I was at her house for 3 days" when it should be "I was at her house for three days". It's always like that when writing literature. Annoying at first, but incredibly crucial. Hopefully you take my advice! x3
| Rosedreamer101 chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
Oh its a lovely story ! Can I assume the "It's a date" was purposely added ?
| lovelymatthew chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
great story so far! can't wait for the next update!
| beverlyamethyst16 chapter 2 . 8/18/2010
:) Please update!
| Hey again chapter 2 . 8/17/2010
yay you updated! love the way that this story is progressing so far.
| MayaD chapter 2 . 8/17/2010
i love the voice of the character. mom sounds like a total bitch.
i'm enjoying this :D hope the next chap comes soon
| noxonexhere chapter 2 . 8/17/2010
Hahaha this story is pretty epic so far!
I love the pouring rain and the janitor mopping away her puddles. Hm update.
| Hey chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
This is really good- write more!
| DisturbingThePeace chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Your story is very intersting. I'm very curous to read more. ;)