It was dark and full of resentment. I loved it! I has a person in mind while reading this and it fit. Everything really ties up nicely and it really was a nice twist...a good twist i should say~

I really enjoyed the rhyming in this. It was simple but it had an almost eerie vibe to it that kept it fresh. I especially like the last stanza. It was a strong way to end and I think it tied everything up nicely. Ha-ha. Good stuff.

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obviously the content is not pleasant, but I liked it. Flows well. Nice job :)