Reviews for Gateway
kuronekoevan chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
An interesting concept with more depth than what was thought possible. For a one-shot, it conveys its message well enough. In this story, one can't help but to sympathize with the protagonist. A good food for thought.
Queen of the Shadylands chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
My oh my, I love the idea, I can think of numerous places like that and now feel the want to visit them just in case, not that I would have gone through, too many people too leave behind in the Shadylands.

I think I love most the door in the water at the end, that made me smile and cheer him on. I thought the line 'He walked foreward, every fire...' should be changed to he walked back as it made me think he was still walking foreward into the lands. Then 'From the other sun came the blinding brilliance of the sun' confused me. Apart from that it was lovely, good descriptions.

-Queen of the Shadylands.

P.S. Thanyou for the ending idea to the photo album, that story has been lacking a few things that I cannot quite place and that ending is one of them, something that connects the new family to photos.