Reviews for Fire
ayezlafoi chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
It took a little bit of thought to understand but it kind of struck me when I worked it out. Nice.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
This is an unusual form, and I quite enjoyed it. Each short line brings up an image that's both related and separate to the rest. I wonder whether poems like these take longer or shorter to write than traditional poetry; every word certainly works hard.
TheFantabulousPandemonium chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I rather like this one. :3

The words can actually paint a picture in one's mind of a raging wild fire and life returning.

I encourage you to keep writing!

MiR
Death by Reflection chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
This is awesome. I love how you us the roman numerals to separate each...stanza. It's also really descriptive so you can really "see" the fire.
Charming Dice chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Can't say I agree that fire doesn't destroy (it kills people , you know), but this was still well-written.
lymli chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I like the part about the fires and their egos since it's as if it's something human cant't be control.