Reviews for Till Death Do Us Part
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 10 . 5/6/2011
"Yeah, us - moving in together, seems to be news of the year. And it's going pretty nice..." She admitted.

-Dash not required?

Loving the fun between Amanda and Lisa, it's nice how they're still so close even after Amanda's fandom and everything :D

I was starting to think there would be no Shane, but your chapters never fail to disappoint, and here he is!
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 9 . 4/17/2011
"Hey, little guy," Shane spoke to Taylor, putting an arm around his father's shoulders. "I think your parents here want to talk..."

- I think maybe you should break this paragraph into separate lines, there's a lot of dialogue here.

Aw Shane is so good with Taylor. And Taylor! He's such a cute kid! :D

I know that meeting with Jason wasn't random - he's probably going to hang around for a while. Shane to the rescue :D

x mandy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 8 . 4/15/2011
Hi there, I'm back to this story! Just couldn't get enough of Shane, you see (: Anyhow, reviewing as I go here!

I didn't think I'd like Patrick, and I was right, I don't. He's really crass, and to his best friend's girlfriend! It doesn't seem right.

"Says the man who's supposed to advertise it..." Shane joked and Amanda stiffened a laugh.

-Stiffened doesn't seem to be the right word here. Was 'stifled' the word you were looking for, perhaps?

Oh wow. You really had me fooled there! Maybe he's not so bad after all... I feel stupid now. :P Anyway unique idea! Overall another great chapter, this story never fails to cheer me up! :D

x mandy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 7 . 2/27/2011
Oh lord. The awesomeness of this story will be the death of me, you know that right? I really love them. Shane is almost to sweet and perfect to be true.
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 6 . 2/27/2011
Another brilliant chapter! (:

I love how serious Shane and Amanda are getting; It's not too slow, and definitely not too fast. Shane is amazing (: He actually reminds me of my ex-boyfriend. Strange, huh? ;)

It's really nice how loose and caring Lisa is about her best friend. She has a playful side, and it's fun to read about. Ty is amazingly cute as well, I hope to see more of him!

Great chapter, amazing work! :D

x mandy
StoryMonster chapter 24 . 2/26/2011
Ah, Shane shane shanne!

I can't believe it.

Ah well.

This was brilliantly written, by the way. Excellent style, grammar and punctuation and perfect plot - you can tell, I'm kinda dying over Shane now.

Great job!


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THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTIC chapter 26 . 2/26/2011
StoryMonster chapter 4 . 2/23/2011
Couple of spelling and grammar mistakes here and there (shutter for shatter, incomplete sentences) but who cares?

They're finally together!

That's so cool. Finally, gosh. I loved the ending, it was so good, especially the way Amanda felt when Shane looked at her and his demanding tome and everything. He's so cool!


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thefaultinourpatronus chapter 5 . 2/22/2011
I love the humor between Amanda and Shane! With all this happy time, I feel there's some major drama coming up. That's the extremely sad part of me speaking, so I hope not!

Their relationship is definitely progressing! I just can't see this story without a happy ending for the them. Hope I won't have to!

Anyway off to the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work (:

x mandy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
"...I doubt anything can shutter it..." I guess you meant 'shatter'. Minor mistake, no biggie!

'Suddenly he was sure, something in her eyes had e' The sentence is cut off! I guess it was an FP problem, though you should definitely edit that.

On to the story. YES! FINALLY! Although Am doesn't seem too sure about it, this is enough for me (: Yes, I'm easily pleased, I know. God, I love these two as a couple! Can't wait for the chapters to come!

x mandy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 3 . 2/21/2011
Divorce huh? We all saw that one coming :) So happy they're working together again! I wish Amanda would just stop being so damn clueless! It's usually the guys who are the oblivious ones, you know? Oh well. Hopefully she'll realize her true feelings soon enough. Aah I love the serious tone to some parts of this chapter. They have SUCH great chemistry - and not even only on the professional note! Can't wait for the rest (:

x mandy
StoryMonster chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
Wow, divorce adds a new angle to it that I never imagined- great twist and brilliant plot, it's flowing excellently so far!

Keep Writing!

StoryMonster chapter 2 . 2/19/2011
Shane! I love him. He's awesome. But he's so... withdrawn, somehow.

Pretty fast paced, you could slow down a little.

The party scene was written really well. :)

Great job!

thefaultinourpatronus chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
Somehow I think the pace of this chapter is rushed, but I'm sure you have something planned. I still love Shane, but can't believe he hasn't said anything to her yet! It doesn't seem like him. The director at the party scene is so cool :) Anyway onward to the next chapter!

x mandy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Great start! I love Shane and his general persona. He and Amanda really seem to have great chemistry together! I love how he knows his stuff, and how he's not a empty actor. Lisa and Amanda's relationship is really great too. Nice first chapter!

x mandy
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