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I really enjoyed this threeshot! I find it so difficult to properly develop both the characters and the plot in such a short span of time, but you do it so beautifully! There is an elegance and poignant air to the brevity of this piece. I think it's really well written; very nicely done! I like how you develop the tension between Jak and Ollie, and your style is very nice. The mark of a good writer's style is their ability to blend dialogue and description with just the right balance, and you do a good job of that! Some people might find the writing a bit sparse, but you make it work beautifully. I really enjoyed reading this! Thank you so much!

Delightful and well written.

I loved it, this was really cute. I love the characters, and the humor was awesome!

That was one of the cutest and fluffiest stories ever. I enjoyed reading it.
It wouldn't be good to read dramatic stories every day. :)
Very well written.

I don't like shots but this one rock, I respect your work. Thank you.

Hahaha, damn right it's your table.

*total spaz* Ahhh! So cute. I loved the kiss scene.

This was sooooo cute! I love it!

That was very sweet, I really enjoyed reading this!

Thank you!

This was a cute story. I definitely liked reading it. I love innocent characters.

Although I usually don't enjoy first person material, I find this tastefully written.

All the best.

This was actually the first story I read from you and I loved it! I've also read the one shot sequel and it was awesome as well. I love how you combine sarcasm, humor, cynicism and love with these two characters. I can totally imagine Ollie with the millions of chains and purple hair staring like a starving bear at Jak. Anyways thanks for sharing your story. Till next time

so fucking cute!... I WANT MORE!

Aww! So damn cute! I really enjoyed that. Truely. Both characters were wonderful and their attraction was so cute. Especially Jak's reaction to being kissed!

Wonderful! Simply wonderful!

The attraction of polar opposites is wonderful, isn't it?

However, the best part of the entire three shot would have to be these few sentences -

"He wouldn't stop staring. Which is weird. And freaky. And...tingly. What the fuck?"

The "And...tingly" part totally won me over (not that the entire story didn't do that). It just... amazing.

Jak and Ollie are amazing characters. And Ollie is wonder and a sweetheart, kissing Jak slowly when he learns it's his first kiss. How adorable!