Reviews for Eyes of Gray
Subbie chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
This is amazingly well written. :) it touches my heart
Generation Dead chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
The last stanza of this is endearingly heart breaking,

"She once had bright blue eyes

Until these horrid days

Now she sees blurred storm clouds

Through her eyes of gray."

I love the rhyme scheme and how the poem flows. Awesome job ;]