|Reviews for Fortune's Trip|
| drakron chapter 14 . 11/11/2012
I love your book Lydia, and I of course would love to buy it, but they don't allow payments from outside USA (I live in Ecuador) so I can't buy it buuuuh.
You are a great writer!
| ChristianAngel01 chapter 14 . 9/2/2012
Very tempting to but, i think I will when i get the chance, I really enjoyed the story up to now
| Angryman chapter 14 . 7/17/2012
This was sooooo good and the... Bam. Ruined my life.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/15/2012
I would have said you are a party pooper, but you are soooo good at writing that you well deserve to be paid for it. Congratulations!
| NightcorexRaver chapter 22 . 4/12/2012
Of course there is no need for me to tell you it was a very good read ... there was some ups and downs, but then again doesn't every book have it's own issue? ...You have talent.
| R. Ficst chapter 22 . 3/19/2012
some ups and some downs, but very enjoyable overall.
| ReadingForKicks chapter 22 . 1/23/2012
I just finished reading this and really enjoyed it. I liked how she didn't give in to Woltan straightaway and how even though he was coming off harsh he came off as vulnerable as well. But some things annoyed me, you didn't mention his age and things seemed slightly unresolved with her dads past. But I look forward to reading the sequel once it's finished xx
| moonshower chapter 22 . 11/12/2011
This really ROCKS!
| sarah.evangelina chapter 21 . 7/8/2011
This is xxxdeathinurarmsxxx or w/e (I've had my quizilla account forever, and I was different then than I am now..so my name is just..Sarah. me. Not an "emo" wanna-be. Lol.) ANYWAYS. I'm such a weirdo. I hate it when people try to control me, gah, it pisses me off and I always rebel. But, I kinda LOVE Wotan, I'd beat the *%$&% %$%&& out of him, A LOT. But like, I 3 him XD! I understand Ayla's change, I'm in Saudi where arranged marriages are..well it is what it is, and like my aunt here says, who is married, through an arranged marriage, and perfectly happy, "When you love someone, you change certain things about you to accomidate to them, and they to you." So, I'm not dissapointed by her change, because when she told him, "Look I don't like this, and that's going to have to change," he accepted her request, true love (I've had my heartbroken by ONE person, who didn't fight for me, but yet STILL says I'm his soulmate, which now, I don't believe at all...who does what he did to his soulmate, fears of his and all?)fights, it doesn't give in when the water's are rough, it trudges on, and grows as a result of the struggle. It's like the love between God and His children, we're not perfect but God fights for us even when we're caught in an ungly storm, and if we persist in that relationship it grows, same as ANY relationship. I guess that's why I love Wotan's character so much, because he never gave up, he ALWAYS fought. Mine gave up at the as soon as he realized just how hard being with me was. I got my heartbroken, he found someone else, Wotan didn't do that, he didn't settle for anything less than what he wanted. I respect that, because that's my own reasoning, if you want something you GET it. You don't sit around hoping for the days the waves are calm and the skies are clear, you forge ahead, that's love. So my point is that although he's domineering and a brute, haha, if I was Ayla I would've done the same thing, not because I'm weak, that's not a term to be used for me..in any sense, but because his love for her shines through, he puts her, in his own way, before himself, how many people do that for someone, anyone? Let me answer that for you, the numbers are few and far in between. So if a man came to me and fought and proved his worth the best way he could, even though he had to fight his own fears and insecurities to do so, wouldn't you give up something in return for him too? I would, and I'm not ashamed to admit it.
| sweetpea265 chapter 22 . 6/7/2011
I ended up really liking this story. While it may not be my preferable cup of tea, every once in a while you need a little variety. Good read. Thanks for putting it out there for me to enjoy :)
| sweetpea265 chapter 18 . 6/7/2011
Mmmmhhhhmmmm. Drama, drama, drama. Although I am still liking the story and the writing, this is not one of my favorite genres. It's getting to the best part though, hopefully. When they work things out.
| sweetpea265 chapter 12 . 6/7/2011
Okay. So, I kind of wish you had started a little earlier with Casey and Malisha if you were going to put it in your story down the line. But maybe it was a recent thing and you'll put a little here and there if and when you go back into editing. It just seems a little sporadic as of right now, but I get why you needed it in the story and I think it was a good call to put it in. Anyway, I am still liking the story. It's not exactly one of my favorites (p.s. that's just because I find my favorite stories tend to lean toward stuff with a little more action/adventure/mystery in them along with the romance rather than drama), but it's enjoyable so far.
| sweetpea265 chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
I'm still liking it. Wish they would talk a little more though and explain some things to each other. He seems a little bit ignorant or stupid not making her explain things to him so he will understand and than can try to fix it. Did he not hear the conversation over the phone though? I would have thought his hearing would be better than that. Anyways,so Ayla may be a half wolf or something? Possibly neat twist to the story.
| sweetpea265 chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
I'm liking it. Glad Ayla is showing spirit. Hopefully Malisha will break out of her shock and do so as well.
| sweetpea265 chapter 4 . 6/6/2011
Haha. I liked this chapter. The choking your own son thing I thought was a little bit much. I had thought that just an "Alpha order" would have been enough without having to physically do anything, but maybe you'll explain that later on. Maybe because Wotan is the alpha heir or something had something to do with that, but other than that I liked it.