|Reviews for Fortune's Trip|
| Soren the Maniacal Dragon chapter 17 . 5/19/2011
You're so evil... I have nothing left to say to you... *cries*
| kylen chapter 16 . 5/19/2011
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! The suspense will literally be the death of me olol. I was super excited with this quick update and then... BAM... the cliffhanger of my life! So, this was very good cause now i need to see what happens, who is at the door? When will wotan show up? These are the things i need to know! So, update chacha update chahaha update! My little update jig has been taken place. Thank goodness Marie was there she seems calm, practical and wise a good person for Ayla to have around. I think Marie almost seems motherly, a nice girl. Whatever happened to the friend she started out with? her name escapes me... I cant believe it was only a week, it def seemed quite a bit longer than just a week, haha. OK, all around good update, but i can forgive you for this travesty aka the CLIFFHANGER? Of course, as soon as you update chacha :)
| Soren the Maniacal Dragon chapter 16 . 5/18/2011
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME? Please update soon! I HAVE TO KNOW! Don't leave me in this awful suspense!
| ominous sparkles chapter 16 . 5/18/2011
NOW THAT IS JUST SERIOUSLY AND UNECESSARILY CRUEL OF YOU! KEEP UP THE CRUELTY I SAY! XD
| Mukuwa.Renu.Koi chapter 16 . 5/18/2011
Aaaaaaaaah! Finally! Finally I can review! Yaaay! Lol. I'm loving it!I loved the original and I love this version to. And you know about the forgiving and not letting yourself be governed by the pain that was...wow lol idk insightful..:)
| Casefile chapter 16 . 5/18/2011
This can't be the end. Noooooo. Looking forward to your next update!
| Romanceobssessed chapter 15 . 5/18/2011
Please update soon
| kylen chapter 15 . 5/17/2011
Oh Wotan, WHY! Cheater are mean, and i dont think he could even stand being with another and there he was doing a whole lot more than being. If Ayla had done that all hell would have broken lose. Ayla needs some time away from Wotan for a bit So, now Ayla is going home, i hope Wotan doesnt kill her family, cause that would be dreadful. The ultimate Wotan match, would beee... I dont know! I hope i find out soon. Great chappie! Thankk you for the explainations especially the little response at the end of the chapter, soo sweet. Ya, totally love the story. I can totally see what you mean how like they (Wotan and Marie etc) are running on wooolf mode, i just have to think wolfy, i, too, would much rathe rhave been slapped then lose my head. OK, sTAY BRILLIANT! Great story and characters!
| Casefile chapter 14 . 5/11/2011
I'm loving this story. I really like the way you portrait the mate-realtionship and the wolves. Can't wait for your next chapter!
| kylen chapter 14 . 5/11/2011
Oh my gooddness! So sensationally amazing! Wotan, dont hit ladies, that would have really made me crazy, like i couldnt deal with that shit, poor Marie. I love Ayla, she is really strong like no nonsense but she isnt stupid, she chooses her battles wisely. You did a good ob writing her, she is strong and a realistic real life women, a relateable character, not some mega kickkass wonderwomen straight out of GI Jane. So, a round of applause to you! So, Aubrey is gonna be ALPHA, sounds like fun, but apparently, not as alpha as wotan, i wouold have thought they would be evenly matched, the mother of all battles. I am a little confused is all, as to their strength, etc. Also, little warning at the end very nocely, but now of course i ned to know what happens, so pretty please with all the goodies on top, update! Alright, brilliant writing as usual keep it up!
| Kouma the AQH chapter 14 . 5/11/2011
Ayla should stay! I get both sides of the story but honestly, they should just stay and make out- I mean, make UP. Right. Yeah, that's what I meant to say.
| kylen chapter 13 . 5/3/2011
Hey good stuff!
You should def update some more, i would love to see what happens!
| Emina chapter 13 . 5/1/2011
haha thanks! It's cool. I'm mad at how controlling Wotan is! And i'm really hoping Ayla doesn't like submit to him so soon and completely. That would be sad because she's so strong! I don't want her to be a Bella.. ( no offense if you read twilight) again, haha update son
| Canoli chapter 12 . 5/1/2011
Gr. I can not STAND Wotan at the moment. You completely made him into a typical male and I hope Ayla runs away from him. Even though he says he understands what Ayla's feeling, I don't think he really does. I find the mindless werewolf love, at least on the femae werewolf's side, ridiculous. I especially feel sorry for Malisha, being trapped as she is now. Is the love these female werewolves feel fake and misguided? Is black magic affecting their love and ability to choose? Will Ayla's father and brother save her? And will Wotan finally understand Ayla's feelings?
Don't get me wrong, I adore the plot, the characters, and your writig style! ;) Perhaps it's the inner feminist in me who calls out for freedom.
| EMINA chapter 12 . 4/30/2011
oh my gosh, update now.
How do you leave a cliffhanger like that?
amazing! please do update as son as possible. like 5 minutes!