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simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I was slightly confused by the meaning here... was it your period or maybe a miscarriage? It was kind of confusing to me...

Anyway the piece was really interesting. I liked how you went from the stained glass to the red blood. That was a nice transition and then to the color of the stockings. It worked well together. Nice last line as well.

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