oh this was nice! sometimes the chaps skip ahead of eachother and dont connect as well but i still get it and its nice! update soon!

Wow, I love your writing! All of your characters are interesting, and not stereotypes. Plus you're a really talented writer. And, as a college student, I really appreciate stories about the world I'm a part of ahaha. Can'twait for the next chapter!

I'm a little lost, or I just don't remember...when did she decided to go with Tom?

Very good chapter, keep up the good work.

I didn't notice any errors or anything.

I'd write more, but unfortunately... I'm sick :(

Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more.

I feel as if I won! Thanks I like the new chapter and thought it was a good fit for the plot to thicken! More!

I love this story. :) This chapter especially. :) The ending is pretty amazingly funny, and made me giggle. :D Keep up the good work!

Good story so far :) I like it quite a bit. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading the rest :D

I see the word squarely a lot change that up. Also I also like the Tom vs Boston, though Tom is mention a lot more than Boston before I choose a side I would like to see a lot more of Boston.

Boston and Mont are ahdorable. I like Bree's text at the end :P You mightve mentioned this in a previous chapter and I've forgotten, but is the importance of the picture only because Mont is part of the crew team and loves the sport?

You're welcome, I'm glad you liked the CC :] hope you had a happy thanksgiving.

I'm still loving this. Bree is one of my favorite characters that I've read in awhile ... she always makes me laugh with how matter-of-fact she is. We are definitely learning these characters as you write. Great update!

Love it!

Can't wait for more!

Have a great gobble gobble day if you celebrate!

This chapter made me want summer back.

Also, make sure to watch your commas.. there are a few places where they'd do well to be located. Other than that, though, good job! I'm still hooked on your writing style. (:

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Mont is such a little meany-face.. leaving the poor guy there. Shame.

Good chapter, though!

Also, Facebook ftw. (;

You have a great way of describing scenery. I can really picture it in my head.

As far as Boston.. Hm. Suspiciousness. I must see where this bidness continues.

All I can say is, at the first chapter, I love your writing style. You tie little witty sentences together so well. You've got me interested! (: