|Reviews for Just Swallowing On|
| Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Hm... To be honest I do not know how to review this poem.
It stirs up feelings of frustration, anger and of being trapped.
So my favorite stanza in this poem is this :
"Prisoner of utilization,
I work for eternity,
facing only disparages"
Not only because it made me look up the words "disparages" and "utilization"in the Greek-English dictionary... (learned new words today!)
But the truth in it.
In our soceity...it's a sad world full of lies and people ripping off other people to make a living...
Cruelty apperantly makes the world go round...
(I don't know if I have the correct definitions...so if I misinterpreted anything my bad!)
PS: Could you do me a HUGE favor and review "Exploring is not Always Easy"? I have been trying to get a beta for it and reviews!