Oh dammit. I read through this and realised you haven't updated in forever. I really like this story... was hoping for some justice against that bitch of a sister.
I won't get my hopes up of you continuing, but you've really good writing. Its well written, not too fast paced or slow.

This entire story is written so magically and beautifully that I literally couldnt put my computer down until Ive gotten to the latest published chapter. I absolutely love your descriptive detailing and how you put SO much into your characters. That is something that I WISH I could do. I love this so much and I cant wait until you update with more. Please do!

What an evil place to leave it at! I knew before I began that you hadn't up dated it in over a year, but what an unkind cliffy! I'm hoping you still abide by your profiles statement of 'I always return reviews' because I have an unhelpful habit of worrying when people abandon their stories... So, are you alive and well? Still writing maybe? With an intention of coming back to this rather intriguing story? At the beginning you said it was going to be cliche and easy to predict, I fear that if that's the case I may be lacking something? Because I'm pretty floored. I really don't know where it's going... not really sure who's wolfy and whose not... or who's evil... apart from Nadine that is :) If you're not going to carry on with it, could you maybe send me a 'this is what would have happened'? Poor Holly really does seem to be a bit out of her depth, especially when it comes to Kayne :) I love the part where he ''appeared to glow with...something.' He could hear her thoughts, right? Endearing, if for her possibly infuriating! I hope whatever you're doing you're happy, thank you for sharing your stories.

On a new chapter!
Please update soon! 3
We miss your updates!

You really need to update soon! This is one of my favorite stories on this website. I need to know what going on and whats gonna happen. You have built the story up so good so far.

Overall very well done, I encourage you to keep up the good work.

so cruel to finish here. Wot has happend in 2012 to make u stop writing. The story is well written. You have introduced so many possibilities and write with a maturity not usually seen on fictionpress
Please please update you say you know where this story is going well its not to late to share

please please update soon! ive been checking up on this story for soo long!

wonderful story, a little slow in the first few chapters but understandable seeing as ur laying down the background story. anyway i really hope ur going to be updating soon!

BAHAHAHA YES! That has got to be the funniest ending to a chapter I've read in a while. Hopefully Holly makes it out of the lion's den alive _

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story

Phew it's been a busy year and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed sooner.

There goes Kayne, imbaressing her further but I guess he's just very to the point and doesn't realise. Can't wait to find out the white wolfs intentions.

Keep it up.

Wow this story is so good. I love it because it's SO WELL WRITTEN (I cannot stress that enough!) seriously, the way you write is beautiful. I like how she's so witty and funny and the way she sarcastically narrates everything but also how well you describe and really paint a picture with words. I'm very intrigued by the plot of this story, who's the good guy who's bad? What's going on really? Yeah, I can't wait until the next chapter

This Kayne handsome man is killing me. His personality is so confusing! Maybe it's because I'm reading at 4:14 in the AM in Canada. Go figure.

Wonderful story, can't wait for the next chapter tomorrow. I swear, I'm typically more constructive than this, but I think I should probably...do the sleeping thing.

Cheerio!

I am so *digging* all these nicknames Petey's giving to Holly. They make me laugh!

Nadine on the other hand, she did not make me laugh. I'm ready with my pitchfork.

Loving this story so far! It's fun to guess who the wolves are, but at this point it's all over the place. Plus, I'm on chapter 7 of 14. No point in guessing, better stop these fingers and keep reading.

Brilliant work! :D