Reviews for Golden Crisp Commercial
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
"He turned to address the fourth wall." Heh, I like this line. It really emphasizes the sense that we're watching a commercial as this scene unfolds.

On the negative, I suppose I could say the uh "plot" (lol) isn't particularly original. But I think it's cute that it brings to mind memories of just about every kids' cereal commercial I saw when I was younger. xD

- Moonstar