Reviews for He Loves Me Not
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 8 . 2/21/2011
omg sad. the ending. please add another one soon! I can't wait to read it :)

XKristie MarieX
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 7 . 2/21/2011
I'm glad this one was on the lighter side. Super intense the last 2 chapters were. The end made me laugh :) Great job. Next :D i'm so excited is pathetic lol

XKristie MarieX
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 6 . 2/21/2011
Wow powerful ending. I've so had to go to the bathroom for the last 2 chapters lol but I wanted to finsh the next chapter lol. Great job! On to the next I go.

XKristie MarieX
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 5 . 2/21/2011
This chapter was so intense I loved it. Great job. On to the nexxt :)

XKristie MarieX
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
Ha aww this is so good. I love how you kinda title it. Fits well. On to the next! :D

XKristie MarieX
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 3 . 2/21/2011
This just keeps getting better and better. I love the end my mom is the same way sometimes. and I know some mom's like that and it sux major. Can't wait to click and read the next :D

XKristie MarieX

P.S. Sorry it took me so long to actually start commenting back. I had the author alert in my email for awhile i just finally got a computer. :)
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
Feel like i'm watching mini episodes of your life lol. and i'm lovin it ;)

XKristie MarieX
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Agreed! Great first Instalment

Xkristie MarieX
DisturbingThePeace chapter 3 . 11/21/2010
Wow. I personally think you've taken a very strong persepctive of a woman or mother that gives off a different perception of herself for others, and becomes this unruly person at home. Its a common theme that you managed to portray in a very clever manner. I think the reason why you were so successful in that aspect was because of the scene in which you desribe how she physically demonstrates that emotional change with actual physical action (where she throws up he hair, and opens up her dress). It really resonates with the reader when you put a scene to a concept. It makes your idea all the more concrete. Really good job! ;)
DisturbingThePeace chapter 2 . 11/21/2010
I love this story for several reasons! ;)First of all, the story and characters are very personable, and that really entices the reader to read amd love it even further. Secondly, I loved how you closed it with the lyrics. I don't know if this was intentional but it was a very smooth and almost ethereal transformation from a song lyric to her personal you know what I mean? Idk if that makes sense to you, but thats what I got from it. Lol. ;)
aby pwn u chapter 7 . 11/10/2010
XD Having so much fun with this story! LOVEING the VERY cute and deep love "sayings(?)"
AlexsandraGabriel chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
First... I'd Laugh My FUCKING ASS OFF, Second I would attempt to black-mail them. As for the second question, I love first days. KEEP WRITING :D I LOVE THIS STORY, AND ITS ONLY CHAP. 2 XD
aby pwn u chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
I would probably get out my cell and snap a picture or record it ] I DO love the first day of school,which is weird cuz ive been to many :P but its funn! so many diff people! I just cant wait to meet em!
aby pwn u chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Hmm..thats a really cool idea! My opinion (sadly) isnt gunna be much since I havent experienced it (xept 4 family & frndz) soo..Ill get back to u on that one! Thank WickedMissy (I was goin thru her favs) 4 leading me to u :) Ill be around alot! ;)
Shadows In The Darkness chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
There really isn't enough writing to make me come to a final decision on whether or not the writing is what most people define as good, but so far it seems fine to me. When there's more I'll be sure to tell you.

As for the question "what is love"...I can't believe I'm trying to answer this...Promise you won't spill my secret answer to anyone? Good.

Love is a beautiful, ruthless pain that people crave for with a raging need. Love is something irrational and far from understandable, but love keeps the world together because it is the one thing any and everything can share.

...now I feel so cheesy I think I might have to throw myself off a cliff.
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