Reviews for Some Poetry
WolfMoon0302 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
The perfect, most abstract way to descibe something that comes from within. I LOVE IT! Well written my friend.
Vampiyaa chapter 12 . 9/29/2012
okay i take back what i said before: THIS ONE'S MY FAVOURITE! :O THAT. WAS. AWESOME.
Vampiyaa chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
this ones officially my fav
Vampiyaa chapter 10 . 9/29/2012
"Ill love you till Hades' hounds take my soul' that line captured me!
Vampiyaa chapter 9 . 9/29/2012
NO, what a fantastic sonnet! :D i love Poe! and i especially liked the way you wrote "Has thou not clutched Galileo from his perch?;And driven away DaVinci with your shadowed demons" such wonderfully thought-out words
Vampiyaa chapter 8 . 9/29/2012
wow, i liked this one especially! :D this one also depict the air of a story told to many, perhaps in this instance by sailors on long voyages :) reminds me of Homer's Odyssey
Vampiyaa chapter 6 . 9/29/2012
Can no one see the madness?;Can no hear the screams of sadness?;Can no one feel the bleeding heart of darkness? that part was my favourite :3
Vampiyaa chapter 5 . 9/29/2012
marvellous! you've certainly exposed the truth of the earth: we all live behind a mask :)
Vampiyaa chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
this one is fantastic! :D it's like a story a grandmother would tell her grandchildren around the fire!
Vampiyaa chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
Ahh this one's cute! :D i luv it!
heyitsstupidme chapter 10 . 7/28/2012
Really sweet and poetic :)
heyitsstupidme chapter 5 . 7/28/2012
Very true, we all wear a mask. I wonder how the world would be if nobody wore a mask.
heyitsstupidme chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
I liked this. Maybe it is not perfect, but I like the topic, because it's very different from a lot of poems. I also like the way you wrote it.

You will walk till the point of exhaustion.

Try to sleep, but noises will not let you rest.

You are bound by my call.

I can even tell you to fall.

When you riseā€¦

My favourite lines :)
checkerboardom chapter 5 . 9/30/2011
I really liked this one. It really touched on how people hide behind the "mask" they put on around other people. My fave line: Hide your self, hide your heart.
Anomander chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
Despite some places where you could improve your rhythm, I believe this is one of the coolest pieces of poetry I'd ever read.

Not because of its subject or its flow (silky flow, that is, despite its lack of rhyming), but because of its choice of words; words which echo inside my mind, with so many twists and turns and transforms your poem into a beautiful story, of two wills, clashing and gnawing at each other (the Dragon's and the mystic's).

You've put beautiful imagery into your words!
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