Reviews for Teal and the General
firefox vixen chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
This look's really good
SuperNovaEclipse chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
... see... I know this hasn't been updated in around ... 2 and a half years, but I'm gourng to have to request that you finish this
hazel house chapter 4 . 11/13/2011
yu better write more or i'll kill you in your sleep "JK" more!its good don't stop
Keenon chapter 4 . 9/24/2011
Oooh, this sounds absolutely delicious! You have to update soon D:
fuyublue chapter 4 . 1/20/2011
MORE! Plez?
Wanabet chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
Go write! what happens -whine- update!
S. J. Vanne chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
Very interesting. Wonder what's going to happen next?
S. J. Vanne chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
Not a bad start. Curious as to where this story is going. Can't wait for you to update.
Rae Kitano chapter 2 . 10/25/2010
Hey you.

Wow I was amazing surprised to find you updated your story so soon.

Interesting chapter. Hope there is more about the mystery man, will he be part of the story or was he just a fill in.

Looking forward to further explanations as to why the children are there and what will become of them.

Post when you can BUT I may prod if you take too long. Who needs sleep right LOL.

Rae Kitano chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I think this could be a promising story if you post regular updates and dont disappoint me with a half finished story *insert cheesy grin here*

You have me intregue as to what is going to happen to the children and why the Emperor wants them in the first place.

Anyway . . I've wait and see what happens.