|Reviews for 52 Flavors|
| summerbreeze081 chapter 2 . 4/2/2012
I really liked this. Not in love with it yet due to Marci being so unpleasant. I'll definitely continue to read though!
| brookeworm chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
:D Again, amazing.
It's funny, I look at Marcie, and I can't help thinking of one of my best friends! xD She was so cold toward me in the begining, when we didn't know each other so well. But then- and I swear, it was like instand magic- as soon as we found some common ground, we bonded, just like that.
It was fascinating.
And your story is fascinating, too, I hope you keep continuing with it!
| brookeworm chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
xD I should have read this much sooner. It was fantastic!
Good job. On to the next chapter...!
| Jessiquie chapter 2 . 9/11/2010
I was kind of worried about this chapter when I started to read. Although I can't really explain it thoroughly I felt the first half of it was really repetitive, the second part however was adorable. I loved the ending; and find it unbelieveably cute that he waited around the ice-cream shop all week for her. The bit about his family basically marrying into another family that sound so alike was a bit disturbing, but the fact that he's trying to get away from all that gives me hope.
Still loving the promise of this story. Such a fantastic idea!
I can possibly help you as a Beta if you want, and depending on what your looking for and the rest. You should probably try and get a few though, so you have multiple perspectives in regard to feedback, as opposed to one person. Just a thought.
| DeathlyFlames chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
OMG! I love it, Meggi! Keep up the awesomeness!
| storybookmoments chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Wow, this story is adorable! Haha :) I absolutely love it! The characters are so realistic and cute! This is definitely at the top of my list on my favorite stories so far. Thanks for bringing a smile to my face!
| Desy.Rae chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
That was really cute :)
I liked it! I'm curious to read more.
| Vidavril chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Even if I think the kiss is kind of hasty, the story is quite nice. I like all the ice-cream stuff D and you describe it so appealing and the way Jess tries to avoid the bad words in front of his niece is so cute. I'd like to read more!
| Jessiquie chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
haha, okay I seriously love the idea of this story. I have to admit, I'm probably a bit like Marcie in this story - in relation to the obession with Ice-cream - so naturally I think its fantastic. She's sort of a bitch though, actually I think its more she talks her mind, and why not be like that.
I hope you update soon.
| Skyterra chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I don't think we actually see Marcie's name until halfway through the story. I think it might be better if you start with Marcie in the beginning instead of keep using "she" until she introduces herself to Jesse.
Also, I hope you don't mind me saying, it's the first time I've ever said this about any story or character - but Marcie's a bitch.
I like Katie. She seems like my favorite so far - besides the knocking-down-of-the-ice-cream.
| Rhapsody's Song chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Well, you've done well not to make a Mary-Sue, that's for sure. I was kind of turned off to Marcie, but I do like that you've stuck to a character, not just perfection. I'd like to see where this is going
| Tiny Cherie chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
the girl is sort of annoying D: but yeah it's pretty cute. and i love the concept :D
| aryagal chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
WOAH SHES SUCH A BITCH.
but i love the part where he kissed her.
| Four and Twenty Blackbirds chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Great concept! Very cute, and well written. I'll look forward to reading more.
| Lexodus chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I did like it. I liked it very much :) Interesting characters (rather than the shallow idiots you must have heard us talking about on SKoW) and a decent premise, and just fun to read, so I will be watching this one :)