Reviews for Missing Pieces |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your story was amazing! Yes, yes i know its not proper grammar to use three exclamation points, however you deserved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Yay! They're together now! More romance! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't send your rabid cats after me! Meep! I am really interested in this story, but sadly I don't have any constructive criticism for you... It's really good though! :) |
![]() ![]() Im sorry but tht was the worst way you cud end ah book. it really isnt nice tht he jus ends their relationship; if ne thing it jus leaves a reader pissed awf. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your story is great, however, I did think it seemed a bit off when Jesse broke up with Sam like that after what they've been through. Plus, he did it over a letter and it didn't really explain the whole story as to why he did it. I hope that will be explained/cleared up in the sequel. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your story is great, however, I did think it seemed a bit off when |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... Great few chapters although... GET THEM BACK TOGETHER! |
![]() ![]() I loved this. Cant wait for the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE U! Ok so the epilogue has sad ending. Jesse moving out. But Sam moves out to. And they both get into NYC! I sooooo want to read the sequel :D |
![]() ![]() At first i though Devon had written the note though i could be wrong i mean he really had gone or maybe Devon did something to him i dont know ill have to wait and see I can't wait for the squeal |
![]() ![]() The new prologue was much better even though I am extremely mad at Jesse still. But i guess, it's just an open door for the sequel... so why not? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story I can not believe that Jesse broke up with her and now he might be going to the same school omg please update the sequel soon. |
![]() ![]() awesome!can't wait for the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the new ending! So much better! Can't wait for more! Update me when you upload it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() y make me hate jesse when i start loving him? okay... mayb i dun hate him but juz disappointed by his act... i think theres some minor mistake... u wrote jesse had a maid in chap 25 when sam was called by jesse's father but later in chap27 u wrote they did not have maids during the cleaning... if i misunderstand... i'm sorry... |