Reviews for Missing Pieces |
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![]() ![]() Aw! Lol, they fell down the funslide! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY. ;D Thanks for dedicating this chapter to me. It was well written, and totally worth reviewing. ;D YOURE THE AWESOMEST TO . ;D Brittany deserved it, Every single insult. ;D I can't believe Sam's still comparing things to Devon, Oh well. He was her first boyfriend. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! Long and I loved it oh so very freaking much! How cute! Ga! :) Made me SMILE LOTS! :) Thanks for the update! It made my day! Pwease update swoon :) Thanks! Haha still lovin' it! Amazing writing! 100% awesomeness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very, very nice and adorable. It's nice that she doesn't admit to liking him for a while and puts up a good fight, you know? And it was adorable. One thing though; you switched to third person at the end there from the first person. Also, the spacing was a little messed up between lines but I am definitely not doubting it was just fictionpress throwing a tantrum :P Great job and now I'm really looking forward to what is going to happen next! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why but this reminds me of the taylor swift song - mine. just cause he makes her feel better. i dont know. i'm weird. but i love this chapter(: and your all your other ones for that matter...(: |
![]() ![]() lulz. I totally expected that. The entire time. And I knew Devon was a boyfriend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU'RE 70th REVIEWER. ;D I'm soo honoured. You're story is great, it really is. Jesse is so sweet, I wish I could find a guy like that. ;D you better be grateful. ;D Haha, just kidding. [; Please update! Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waiting for the next chapter! :) Keep up the nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um it was good but to freaking short! Sorry but thats the truth. It took my like under two min. to read this... no good. Very good wrting though i di have to say that. But it was oh so very short. Put more time into your story so it will be longer! Please? XHappy writingX ~I-am-happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! you updated! :D |
![]() ![]() I'm sure you'll get 70 reviews in no time. Including mine! I liked it! :D |
![]() ![]() It was amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, very cute! I really hope they last and nothing goes wrong! Britany is a bitch! Ahh! Gave 'er a good punch though :) Good for her! Hehe Totally loving the story and please try to update sooner then later. Try? It would be awesome! I see a few mistakes sill little things but thats all good (my story has lots of mess ups! :O) REally enjoying, great writing skils and I think you could go, far. I give the story and 4 star. Maybe more in the coming chapters! Maybe. I wish you all the best in your story! Now Lights, Camera, Love Story! Happy wrting! ~I-am-happy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think she got used to him a little too quickly, and she started LIKING him even quicker! Anyhow, lovely story you've got coming (: x mandy |
![]() ![]() yep i did like it |