Reviews for Missing Pieces
HowlingWolf chapter 15 . 1/2/2011
Aw! Lol, they fell down the funslide!
matchutea chapter 15 . 1/2/2011

Thanks for dedicating this chapter to me.

It was well written, and totally worth reviewing. ;D


Brittany deserved it,

Every single insult. ;D

I can't believe Sam's still comparing things to Devon,

Oh well.

He was her first boyfriend.

I-am-happy chapter 15 . 1/2/2011
Oh my gosh! Long and I loved it oh so very freaking much! How cute! Ga! :) Made me SMILE LOTS! :)

Thanks for the update! It made my day! Pwease update swoon :)


Haha still lovin' it! Amazing writing! 100% awesomeness!
AlreadyGone chapter 15 . 1/2/2011
Very, very nice and adorable.

It's nice that she doesn't admit to liking him for a while and puts up a good fight, you know?

And it was adorable.

One thing though; you switched to third person at the end there from the first person.

Also, the spacing was a little messed up between lines but I am definitely not doubting it was just fictionpress throwing a tantrum :P

Great job and now I'm really looking forward to what is going to happen next!

My-Bloody-Sacrifice96 chapter 14 . 12/28/2010
I don't know why but this reminds me of the taylor swift song - mine. just cause he makes her feel better. i dont know. i'm weird. but i love this chapter(: and your all your other ones for that matter...(:
Ingrid chapter 14 . 12/21/2010
lulz. I totally expected that. The entire time. And I knew Devon was a boyfriend.
matchutea chapter 14 . 12/21/2010

I'm soo honoured.

You're story is great, it really is.

Jesse is so sweet, I wish I could find a guy like that. ;D

you better be grateful. ;D

Haha, just kidding. [;

Please update! Thanks.
impossibly-infinite chapter 14 . 12/20/2010
Waiting for the next chapter! :) Keep up the nice work!
I-am-happy chapter 14 . 12/20/2010
Um it was good but to freaking short! Sorry but thats the truth. It took my like under two min. to read this... no good.

Very good wrting though i di have to say that. But it was oh so very short. Put more time into your story so it will be longer! Please?

XHappy writingX ~I-am-happy.
shanaenae123 chapter 14 . 12/20/2010
yay! you updated! :D
HowlingWolf chapter 14 . 12/20/2010
I'm sure you'll get 70 reviews in no time. Including mine! I liked it! :D
HowlingWolf chapter 13 . 12/12/2010
It was amazing!
I-am-happy chapter 13 . 12/12/2010
Aww, very cute! I really hope they last and nothing goes wrong!

Britany is a bitch! Ahh! Gave 'er a good punch though :) Good for her! Hehe

Totally loving the story and please try to update sooner then later. Try? It would be awesome!

I see a few mistakes sill little things but thats all good (my story has lots of mess ups! :O)

REally enjoying, great writing skils and I think you could go, far.

I give the story and 4 star. Maybe more in the coming chapters! Maybe. I wish you all the best in your story!

Now Lights, Camera, Love Story!

Happy wrting! ~I-am-happy
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 4 . 12/3/2010
I think she got used to him a little too quickly, and she started LIKING him even quicker! Anyhow, lovely story you've got coming (:

x mandy
sarah chapter 11 . 11/29/2010
yep i did like it
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