Reviews for Missing Pieces chapter 19 . 3/28/2011

Stupid Jesse. god. some times hate him.

Its really good so far.i love it
Gnarsoph Kham chapter 19 . 3/15/2011
okay, I've loved it so far, a ton. So I personally want you to finish, but only if you keep doing the great job you've been doing. If you didn't, it would be disrespectful to what you already have.

I admire your audacity to trash all this great work, but save it or something! I loved it!

For a new title, my vote definitely lies with Shattered or Missing Pieces. Just because I hate titles that are a sentence long like THE SPECTACULAR STORY OF A PERSON WHO YOU MAY OR MAY NOT CARE ABOUT SCATTERED WITH GENIUS

because that title is not genius.

And no,that isn't a real title.
RonieLove chapter 19 . 3/14/2011
heyy i'm not sure if im late but i came up with a few.

um ...

Choosen/ Choosen Pain- because she choose jesse and devon choose her/ and this causes her so much painn

Unconforatble Affection- Devons love for her and heer love to jesse in the beginning, turning into something else

Tortured Love- she really didnt want to like jesse in the beginning and the same thing with him. And devon and her mom in a way tortures her life.

i hope maybe yu can use any of these or maybe yu can get ideas from these. i really hope this helps. i do hope yu keep the main names in the storyy.

Good luckk!
squillink93 chapter 19 . 3/11/2011
finish it, and then if you really want to re-write, do that... i'm eager to read more of this story :)
AngelEvie chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
I like the titles Shattered and Missing Pieces. And I would really like it if you finished befoe rewritting. I wanna know how the story ends! :)
notthiscreative chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
For the whole new title thing, I really like shatter mirror image.

As to the redoing, it really just comes down to what you want. I'll read no matter your decision.
xxLovelessly Yoursxx chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
eh eh eh! finish, then rewrite please?
Curlysquirt95 chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
I liked the Cracked Mirror Image title the best, the others just don't compare. :)

You should DEFINITELY finish this story before you rewrite it! You've kept it going for this long, so you can't just stop when it's just getting good! Please continue writing it, you write very well and I always look forward to reading your chapters. :D
Amaeveing chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
please please finish it
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
please pleasep lease keep writing the story
XshadowxdemonX chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
Finish it, then see what it looks like when every thing is finished and posted. once you stop getting reviews for it after it's done, then think about rewritting it
U MadeMyLifeComplete chapter 18 . 3/10/2011
Cracked mirror image please it should be the sequel
U MadeMyLifeComplete chapter 19 . 3/10/2011
please keep writing the story i love dit and still love it
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 19 . 3/9/2011
I reckon you should finish this story... Actually I DEMAND you finish.

But I CAN help you out with the title problem.

I like 'Shattered' cuz its short, sweet and to the point. And also 'When the other flip flop falls' cuz I just LOVE those sayings which have something to do with the story...

Hope this helps :)
My-Bloody-Sacrifice96 chapter 19 . 3/9/2011
. then you can rewrite. And I agree. Jensen Ackles IS A SEXY BEAST.
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