Reviews for Soul |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting ~ in such a short space, you manage to fill us in on so much of the relationship dynamics here. I'm intrigued to find out more, so I hope you'll extend this short piece! ~ Sakina, from the Crossroads x |
![]() ![]() ![]() dam your one-shots spark so much curiosity in me _ im so intrigued... |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's a very good sense of urgency in this... I like the tension. For such a short story it does a lot.. there's a lot of subtlety in this story and I like that it's seems more like an offering to the reader to think about, that in it's minimalism and the finality of the last line you've still left a lot up to the reader to determine, like the relationship history and so on. Nice work. |