Reviews for I Love You Please Don't Kill Me?
DragonOwl chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Great! Love the ending!
bubublacz chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Hahahaha I love the last line :D So cheeky of her :D
The13StarsOfAlaska chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
She so threw him under the bus.
Hola cmo ests chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Hola! Lol I love this one shot! Evelyn is such an awesome person! She's so independent and I totally feel for her. Sexism annoys the crap out of me. I love the ending: "I guess I don't always have to be independent, ask him he'll tell you everything!" Lol. Ok, sigue escribiendo. Tus esto estorías son bien interesantes y chistosos. I want you to translate that. I hope I spelled everything right, lol. Adiós! (I bet you know that one, lol)
lexielight chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
love the ending.
Izzyswims chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
"Ask him. He'll tell you everything."... Love it. I should let you know I have had this story on my favorites for a while and it is one of the few one shots that I re-read.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Hahahahaaha LOVED IT! My favorite part:

"I guess I don't have to always be independent," I whispered to him.

"What do you mean by that?" he hissed back.

I stood up from the couch and walk past my mother, "Ask him. He'll tell you everything."

Hahahaha I love Evelyn
Ginbrat chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
That was the most funniest stuff I've ever read!
Ryzxn chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
You have a new stalker- I mean, uh, fan. You do realize that, don't you? xD.
Anyway. Onto the actual review. Amazing, as I suspected. I was thinking it would be a bit longer, but even though it's short, it's wonderful. ;D. Do I get a hug now?
ChellyWrites chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
This was really cute :) You did an amazing job! xoxo, Chelly
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
haha! the ending was wicked good:)
J.C Jackals chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
This was great, I really enjoyed it. Also, Evelyn's character is very likable in my view.

One thing though, an this part:

['He nodded distractedly, "Why didn't you come?"

"Because I wanted you to be there! You know how much it meant to me!"]

Shouldn't there be Evelyn saying something between his question and his outburst? If that's her in the second line it looks awkward. Other than that you wrote this competently.

~JC
xxXNightsareDaysXxx chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Cute cute cute 3 :)
non.graceful chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Only a few sentences did not make sense, other than that it was cute :)

Though, I reckon you should have dragged out the sexism thing...
There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
this is the funniest cutest thingt!

i loved the last line;)

i kinda want to read more x x x
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