Reviews for Before the Fall
zagato chapter 18 . 12/6/2020
Great story!
Terminate Account chapter 13 . 10/10/2011
interesting, great chapter
Terminate Account chapter 10 . 10/5/2011
I always say 'good' in my reviews so I am going to say something else.

That was a great chapter...
Terminate Account chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
Really good...
Terminate Account chapter 6 . 10/5/2011
Good so far.
Terminate Account chapter 3 . 10/3/2011
Good story...
Kiveda chapter 18 . 7/12/2011
very cute/light ! really liked it!

~Kiveda

-pls review my story Freedom? i'd appreciate it!
TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret chapter 18 . 1/18/2011
I liked it...it was good. I think you should be a screen-writer though, as the kind of writing that you do would be great for that. All of your stories would be great movies, and that's something that not every book has. A lot of stories are just to long and intricate to be movies but all of these would be great! :)

-you number one fan
TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret chapter 7 . 1/17/2011
heheh it would have been so perfect if this only had seven chapters. :) they would be admittedly long but still, it would be kind of funny.
One-Loving-Song chapter 18 . 12/26/2010
Wel I just go done reading every chapter in the book, and I really liked it. And I guess you where right they the chapters where a bit short but they where all really good, and had me keep wanting to read more to find out what would happen next in the book. But anyways I really liked the book.

O-L-S

P.S. Sorry for not reviewing every chapter.
oliviatham chapter 18 . 9/15/2010
sweet :)
AbbeyXD chapter 18 . 9/13/2010
awesome story and extremely cute ending!
m4g3rul3z chapter 18 . 9/12/2010
hey i've only read through a couple of stories on fictionpress, but believe you me this is the best I've seen so far. It's not overdone and the characters are well constructed, so much so I sincerely can believe they exist in the real world. XD

I didn't see errors in sentence structure or grammar; spelling wise only once or twice when your spell check got a little lazy. The pacing was really good too, and it's a good short story that kept me riveted at each chapter. I don't know why you only have 23 (now 24!) reviews. it doesn't do your story justice.

Keep writing and i hope to see more from you!
Da-zGreen chapter 18 . 9/12/2010
No! It's finished! You have to write an epilouge. lol. What happens to Tanya? Is there a sequel! I would love to have a sequel, but totally up to you. lol. OMG! Thanks for the fun! I love your characters, they are just perfect. I really enjoyed Nace and Faye, the cuteset couple lol. Anywasy, hope to read more stories from you. Thanks alot!
Da-zGreen chapter 17 . 9/11/2010
Aw. How sweet of his mother. So what happen between them? Did I miss something in chapter 16. All I remember was she went to the park and then she saw him. Suddenly, she's in his car driving back to his mansion? Did you purposely do that? lol. Anywasy, love the chapter anywasy, do update soon!
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