Reviews for Before the Fall
AbbeyXD chapter 8 . 9/2/2010
cute chapter! can't wait for the next one :)
AbbeyXD chapter 7 . 8/31/2010
aw Nace is so sweet! Anyways good chapter! update soon :)
MindaAnn chapter 6 . 8/30/2010
Great chapter!
AbbeyXD chapter 6 . 8/30/2010
love this story! but I am confused about one thing. Who are Faye's real parents? Anyways this story is really good and funny so please UPDATE SOON! :D
A chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
AWESOME! Love the chapter and story! can't wait for the next one! plz plz plz plz update soon!
MindaAnn chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
Great intro, it makes the reader curious. The one thing that I would give as advise, is to think your character's actions out a little more. In one of your other stories, it was great early on, but when the situations became complicated, the character's actions seemed irrational and became unbelievable.
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