Reviews for Grandfather Clock
Angel Investor chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
I love it! It's very abstract and artistic. I wish I could write poems like that, but mine always turn out very self-explanatory.
lymli chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
the last verse is kinda positive since means life never ends, but as I read I felt scary, I don't know why, but instead of thinking about the clock, I was thinking about the grandfather's phantom.

it's a great poem.
Sir Bradford chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I am beginning to see a congruency in your style. The image this poem creates is very vivid, and the theme is one as old as your subject. The fall of man is displayed very well here.

The latter half of the poem seems to peter out. I can't put my finger on it exactly, but I noticed the stanzas got generally longer. Writing this half asleep I am sure had something to do with it, but you should try and communicate your theme evenly throughout the poem. I felt like the closure was being forced on me at the last minute. Other than that, excellent work, keep going.
Anthony Tesla chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
You said it didn't make any sense, but maybe I'm reading too much between lines, but I think I get it XD

Seriously, a great poem, I love its weird surrealism.