Reviews for Photograph
TheFantabulousPandemonium chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I actually really like this poem - it reminds me of the many photos stored away in my closet somewhere. Keep writing!

MiR
Dana S chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
interesting...and beautiful :)

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3M2R chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
sounds a little like a sonnet. A lot of short syllabled lines, normally containing up to 3 words. It isn't really my type of poem to read, but I'd like to know why you use Greek numerals for your stanza breaks. Gives me the impression that they belong to different poems altogether. (it's for all the poems of yours I've read) Maybe it's just me... this is the first time I've read poems like that, they normally just leave it as one who paragraph or have null lines as stanza breaks.

I love part i the most (: Strong imagery. The worst of all the stanzas (IMO) is the last. It sounds like a disclaimer :X Sorry if that was a little overt. But yeah, I feel that the poem would be better without it.