Skip to the end of the school year. Or at least to when they have sex. Hey, maybe you can have Eve's dad make a special guest appearance. Perhaps add in another boy to Eve's life and make her boy a jealous and dangerous man?

I honestly cannot tell you how much I love this story to bits and pieces. I definitely think it's one of the best werewolf stories out there. It's been one of my favs, ever since you published it, and trust me, I've kept my beady eye on it, hoping it would update for months 3 I like your rogue story as well, though not as much as I do this one.

Things that I love about this story of yours, is that I love the characters. They're very detailed and everything I somewhat portray in my mind to be the nature of a werewolf you have hit right on the nail, and to me it all seems very believable and realistic.

Your characters fight. That's a good thing. I've read a lot of other similar werewolf/mate stories as well, where the couple completely, creepily, and cheesily fall head over heels for one another, and the heroine is just totally blind and submissive, and the story is just very un-ideal and unrealistic. Stories like that tend to be run-of-the-mill, and very banal.

Sterling seems very much the way any male werewolf would act, which is, by his nature, to be very territorial, possessive, and selfish. And because of this, you have actually created a heroine -Evelyn- who does not become meek and docile, the way it is certainly popular for most other heroines to become. So much so I find myself thinking, 'is this the way I would react to such a situation?' And in fact, it would be. I would not just lie down and be saddled with whatever duties came my way for the rest of my life as a mate. Evelyn is such a fighter. She reacts to all that has been set upon her very sensitively, and it makes so much sense, given her situation.

All in all, I think you have done great. I love the plot. I love the characters. I love the troubles that they are going through. As I've said before, this story is one of my all time faves. That being said, with all due respect, I think you should finish the story the way you've wanted to from the very beginning, not by the fans/readers standards of what is their happy ending. This is your story. Your words, your characters.

I can understand brainstorming ideas with select few for inspiration. I can understand just deleting it. I can understand keeping it up for posterity even if it makes you cringe.

This is my critique, I promise I mean no harm! I just really wanted to give you my honest thoughts, only because I really do love your work.

I wish you the best for your creative juices to keep on flowing!

I love this story, I think that Sterling should do something to get Eve to realize that they are soul mates, do something nice for her, take her to meet her pack and do romantic things to/for her.

OMG, I love this story pleasee! never stop writing this story!

fkjdanknkfnfks I LOVE YOUR STORY!

This story was GREAT! or so far it is. I love that she doesn't just fall in love like most girls do. Watching her fight him all the way is awesome. Ota boring when all the girls just give into the mans attentions. I would fight all the way. Still she should fall in love. But slowly.. I love the way they react. Happy.. angry.. annoyed. How he sees it so easily and doesn't understand why she's upset. How he thinks mate.. my mate. And she just doesn't want him. Keep wrtinf please?

Awesome story seriously love it

I love the direction the way it's going now

Maybe he should just arrive and go and take we out on dates they grow fond of her then maybe a formal or graduation comes and she gets asked out on a date? One of her guy friends gets to close? Or something happened to her when he was away and that set him off as they have a fight? Another full moon and he can't control himself and fucks her again - in his wolf form?

Hope this was helpful

Love your story

Awesome story seriously love it

I love the direction the way it's going now

Maybe he should just arrive and go and take we out on dates they grow fond of her then maybe a formal or graduation comes and she gets asked out on a date? One of her guy friends gets to close? Or something happened to her when he was away and that set him off as they have a fight? Another full moon and he can't control himself and fucks her again - in his wolf form?

Hope this was helpful

Love your story

Wonderful story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Please update soon! :)

Carnivorous Animals,

It has been exactly 1 year sense your last update! :) I jsut want you to know, that in case you feel like no one is reading this, you have loyal fans, such as myself still waiting for their update!

Princess Of Perfection

I'm intrigued. Please keep writing this.

Oooh, this is getting very interesting, very interesting indeed. The first chapter had me laugh a little at the greatness of cheesiness but I kept on reading because I saw potential! Let's see where this story goes because it's leading up nicely. I also appreciate the length of the chapters. You put in a lot to each of these chapters and it makes each chapter a worthy read. I love it. Keep writing!

:)

that was awesome! i hope you write more soon as i loved it!

This story is very interesting haha..Please continue to write it! :)

Awe, Sterling's...interesting lol. : ) Very good read, I like the way everything flowed. The language was really great too!