Reviews for Hunters Moon
Princess Of Perfection chapter 4 . 12/1/2010
I absolutely love this! Everyday I would check back to see if you updated, and I havnt the last like, 2 days? And then today I checked and I was extremely happy! This is my absolute favorite story. Your description and detail so nice. And when you write the scene where they make love, make sure it is detailed. Very, very detailed! I love your work!
Raised with Fangs chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
i love i. it kinda took me forever to read. lol, anyway, update soon!
Anonymous chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
I like this story. A guilty pleasure, perhaps, as I usually frown upon imprinting and the like. But, surprisingly good. Keep on writing!
live.laugh.brenda chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
wow, strong emotions in this chapter. i like it.

update soon!
LivesTooShort52 chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
Ok... Well like you said at the beginning you did have a couple or errors, but other than that I loved it! Keep up the good work please!
Paschen chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
It is lovely to see an update! Thanks for the hard work ;)

I couldn't help but notice that someone had commented about how Sterling seemed a little OOC in chapter 3. I don't personally think that he has ever strayed out of the character traits you set up. The variation in his temperment made him more relaistic since people are not one dimensional and oftem have conflicting opinions/points of view. But this is just me and I don't mean to belittle anyone else's opinion.

I don't think chapter four was terribly confusing. It was slow but it had more explanation as you promised. It helps define Evelyn a lot more as a person as well. I love who she is becoming. It is also refreshing how she is alone at home due to a less stereotypical situation where the author just throws the female in a house alone just because.

There seems to have been a whole bunch of interesting little things mentioned or foreshadowed as well. Looking forward to more!
estrela jem chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
you have quite the interesting plot here! It's been a while since I've read something so unique! You seem to have a very good grasp on the characters and you're writing is great! You have a very good balance between description and plot! I'm looking forward to your next update! Keep up the awesome work!
veyo chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
Can this review count as a billion reviews, Cuz I love this story so much please update frquently!
Briana Banana chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
Just started reading this story...And i'm loving every word of it... Cant wait for whats instore for this couple. I have a feeling its going to be big!
C chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
Okies I finally got to chapter four. Its a bit tedious, but I'm glad that you're not rushing the story for the sake of getting through the plot. Its pretty good
C chapter 3 . 11/30/2010
I really really like this chapter
C chapter 2 . 11/30/2010
What you said in your author's note was true, the chapter was kind of confusing but I think I agree when you say it needed to be.
C chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
I like it, its kinda cute that he acts like a puppy
colour me perfect chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
I honestly love this story so much. The idea of werewolves and soulmates can often be overused, but your story is really refreshing and unique and I love every bit of it.

I love how Sterling's a raw, primal werewolf, and how he's not used to dealing with a lot of emotions. I especially liked the line in the latest chapter saying something about her being the only person he had ever loved, and I'm looking forward to her bringing him closer to humanity.

I like the main character. I don't think her emotions are too extreme at all; they're actually quite realistic for the situation.

Your writing is really good; the emotions are powerful and the wording is amazing. I think it's great the way he wholey believes that he loves her, then openly admits that he doesn't care for anyone but himself. It will be interesting to see how his view on love changes throughout the story.

Anyway, I don't know what else to say. You're a great writer, I love this story, and you better update soon because I left a very long review! JK :)
Eccthlacine chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
I loved the sense of irou within that one comment in the first chapter. Generaly well written throughout, andfun to read. I kept waiting for thr moment when she would finally realize that a strange man in hr house alone with her could easily murder,assault,etc here, but he story progressed relatively fine without it. Her wealth and generally ease of living almost seems to have come too easily, especially since her fathers absence in mentioned and lamented, but without great emotional turmoil. The complete lack of safety is a bit beyond reasonable suspension of belief and should probably eh explained more to compensate. I loved the spit thing. It made me both want to laugh and shiver at the same time. Your story is both interesting and disturbing, and I cannot wait to read more.
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