Reviews for The Goatherd
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
very beautiful story
renell.mallari.1995 chapter 2 . 1/2/2017
My name is Pip. Yay!
semantics chapter 6 . 8/16/2015
5 years later... still love it :)
blue77 chapter 6 . 6/30/2015
beautifully crafted story! made me ugly cry though a lot!
SmileyfaceGurl chapter 6 . 4/19/2015
I cried, this story is so beautiful!
Ishotthealbatross chapter 6 . 1/2/2015
A beautiful ending to a beautiful story.

I loved all six chapters of this and I wish there were more. You have this way of writing that flows so smoothly, your words so eloquent. It's never too much, and not too less. The style of writing leaves you wanting more.
Ishotthealbatross chapter 5 . 1/2/2015
This chapter was so sad, it made me tear up a little. But the writing was beautiful, as always.
Ishotthealbatross chapter 4 . 1/2/2015
Ahh the feels :D

Your writing is brilliant. The words paint such a vivid picture in my mind that it's like I'm watching the sequence of events happening as well as reading about them. I'm very very impressed by the quality of the work. You should be published.
Ishotthealbatross chapter 3 . 1/2/2015
I love Pip's character. And I love the goatherd's character too. He's gruff but uncharacteristically gentle.
Ishotthealbatross chapter 2 . 1/2/2015
Yes, it moves slow but not in a way that bores you. I like the minute details. They make it unique.
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
Really interesting start...can't wait to read what happens next...
InsanityAndBeyond chapter 6 . 6/11/2014
I'm so glad discovered you as an author.
Love your style of writing.
This story was so great, subtle but so cute.
R. Ficst chapter 6 . 6/1/2014
Very interesting piece. Stands apart from a lot of what I have read here. Long stretches of silence characterize the storytelling - and it works.
Great work.
nffhkasjfnbsdkjb chapter 6 . 5/26/2013
This was a really enjoyable read:) I found the beginning a bit slow, but you say that yourself in one of your author notes anyway :P but once it got going it was truly lovely. I like the anticipation and the tension between Pip and John- the subtlety of all the various characters reactions when the female visitor tried to give Pip some experience was really well done. And the difficulty both main characters had in expressing their feelings won me over too.


Guest chapter 6 . 3/3/2013
ya : )
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