Reviews for The Rules of Love and War
my princess ending chapter 10 . 12/24/2013
Happy ending. Not only because I really like happy endings but because Wade deserves one. Call me weird but I think Luke deserves one too. Like, end it with him going to therapist's offices for appointments or something to control that anger problem of his. Give Wade and Lana the ending they deserve and if you don't, I will personally hack into your account and rewrite the whole ending. :)

Even though this isn't my favorite story, I think the message you're trying to send is really important and administration needs to get together with bullying/cyber bullying. I'm sometimes a bully but so is everyone though I find it hard to believe in bullying until suicide since I'm from San Francisco which is a place that's quite friendly. Regardless, I like the story line and the message it was trying to send out. Can't wait for the finale!

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 9 . 12/24/2013
So I was actually wrong but she definitely took a while before breaking up with Luke, it just wasn't written. I'm proud of Lana and I understand why she'd cry even though he treats her like shit. I'm so glad that it's at least realistic.

There's an error in this chapter. When Luke pulls Lana to the side, he brings her to an empty classroom I believe? Since they were in the hall earlier. But then later, it says that they broke up in the parking lot. It might help to avoid these mistakes by either writing it in one go or rereading what you've written every time you pick up your pen to add to a chapter. It also helps with fixing grammar/spelling issues.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 8 . 12/23/2013
Something in me tells me that Lana is gonna have trouble breaking up with Luke and these last few chapters are gonna be filled with nothing except drama.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 4 . 12/21/2013
There's something about this story that doesn't make me comfortable. Usually I just sink into the story and it feels as if I'm there, inside, experiencing everything with the main character. I feel like it's the characters; I'm not too ecstatic about Wade, Luke, or Lana. I love her name by the way, Lana Winters. I hope the problem gets announced soon so it'd be more intriguing.

With love,
my princess ending
my princess ending chapter 2 . 12/20/2013
My dear, this was the last story to complete on my list. With all the other ones, I wasn't that excited to read but they ended up being really interesting. This one doesn't capture my attention as much as the others do. It might be because I had just finished Like Father, Like Son and that was pretty freaking good and now I have to suddenly switch gears to something else. I'm sure it'll get better for me!

With love,
my princess ending
silentvoiceshout chapter 10 . 12/9/2013
i hope u come back with the last chapter soon..

luke's crazy!what an idiot! his stupidity just cost a person his life,another his future n a family their beloved one..bullies are stupid cowards as everyone knows...

i hate & never read incomplete stories but damn I have read 2 of ur's coz I like ur work! will wait for Wade & Lana's happy ending..
pastelcolors chapter 10 . 11/26/2013
ohmygod, don't. you. flipping. dare.

I read a story where they start again with introductions at the end AND I CAN'T FLIPPING DO THAT AGAIN.

So please let them live happily ever after at Duke because Wade is a freaking sweetheart and the idea of not having them together is, ugh.
Nobody chapter 10 . 11/12/2013
Please don't make the ending depressing I don't think my heart could take that.
Sharon chapter 10 . 11/12/2013
I would love a happy ending after all the sadness and pain they both have had to endure, unless will be heartbreaking.
Happy Ending Han chapter 10 . 10/14/2013
Happy ending I know everyone's expecting and junk so it won't be much of a surprise but seriously? Who doesn'tlike a happy ending.?
Choukou chapter 10 . 10/14/2013
Resolution! I want Wade and Lana to be together. Possibly in a "future" setting where you can see where everyone landed :)
lostlamb chapter 10 . 10/14/2013
WOW! At least we finally know the story. There is definitely something wrong with Luke. Wow.
clumsyhead chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Ofcourse Happy ending...please please,Wade surely deserves it,he is like waiting for so long for her to come around if not for us for him hehe...yeah I too want to know is it so diFficult for people to be nice to each other? I really hate people like Luke,get a life... Is your life not enough to screw so you start screwing others happiness n satisfied life...sorry got little carried away but pls stop BULLYING...get a life people if you r bullying
mylittleprincess chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Happy ending please,update soon.
Megsi chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Oh God. The feels in this chapter wow. I nearly cried. It's a very real and sensitive issue and you captured it perfectly.
I would've been interested to hear what Luke had to say to defend himself but I guess Lana summed him up perfectly. That's some fucked up history.
Wade and Lana are so perfect and of course if you ask me, or any reader, we're going to say give us a happy ending. But if you write one just to make us happy I don't think I'll like it. Go with your plan, it's your story, even if we're not immediately happy with it this is your baby that you've been working on. Don't change it for us. I'm sure whatever you'll write we'll understand why and I'll still love it even if they never happen or if you leave it open at college, because that would be real and your story deserves a good ending not something you forced for the readers.
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