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This was amazing!
You should get this published

This story is one of the best on this site. It's very well written, has well developed characters that are fun, likable, and funny, and a plot that keeps on moving. I've read it a few times. Thanks for the entertainment!

the description of Mr. Strange kinda reminds me of the 10th doctor.

Extraordinarily well developed characters and story. There were a couple of rough jumps and scattered grammar / spelling errors but it didn't detract from your universe or the story at all. Thank-you for sharing a potent story with us :3

That was an epic journey. Thanks so much.

This story was absolutely amazing! I experienced just about every emotion lol!

I do not like romance, but the humor more then makes up for it so far.
And I tend to like characters that say "hmmm" instead of grinning wildly.

So this is probably the fifth or sixth (or seventh) time I've read this story, but it keeps getting better! I love all of these characters: Jakob and his anti social tendencies, Seb and his inability to just let things be good, Delilah and her raunchy snark, Riley's hatred of democracy... It's all too wonderful. I love that as much as Seb and David Tennant are mysteriously similar, they're not actually anything alike in personality (mostly). They're not the same character, which is comforting. The first time I read this I was convinced that they would be, so watching Seb develop and become his own person, not a copy of a different character, was awesome! (and I love that you alluded to some of the Who similarities in some of the later chapters.) Sexy, exciting, and absolutely fucking hilarious, I loved this story.
Muchisimo amor,
La Sola y La Fascinante
PS: totally cried. Like a god damn baby.

Only 3 paragraphs in and MR STRANGE IS THE DOCTOR. 10th Doctor. At least thats where you got your inspiration.

Wut u doin puttin this on Fiction Press thia is Fanfiction!

I'll still read it though.

You made me cry and... that doesn't happen a lot. Thank you for writing this story it was... oh how do I explain this. It was- it was... Gah.

My god I love this story way too much for my own good. I would tell you my favourite character, but to be honest I like them all. Sebastian is awesome and pathetic in a 'I am a genius except when I have to interact with people' sort of way, Jake is just human enough to fool you, but when you find out he's an alien everything that's strange and cute about him adds up, Delilah is just too badass and Riley is annoying but sweet. And don't get me started on the amazing plot line. So many adventures in one story!

The first thing that came to mind when you described Sebastian was David Tennant! I don't know if it's a coincidence but their personalities are very alike.

I thoroughly enjoyed myself with this story there were a couple things that were a little sketchy but since I can't remember them they were obviously not major or in no way took away from the story. I loved these characters and I'm sorry to see them go. I have to say that Marl was one of my faves he was as sarcastic and purposely annoying like Del and Jake but not as much of an asshole about it. Definitely going to look at your other works now.

Great story! Absolutely LOVE Jakob, Sebastian, Riley, and Delilah!