Wow! Amazing job. I seriously spent like 4 days reading all of this in my spare time. Great job on characterization and development, detail, action, etc... At the end I had to wonder though: how is it possible Jakob and Sebastian aren't covered from head to toe in scars?

Can't wait to read more of your work!

Whew, a more serious moment! I can finally stop laughing long enough to say how much I'm enjoying this story!

Wow, this story is perfect. It's just perfect. Surprisingly it took me a week to get through, but that's because there were so many moments where I just had to stop and take a moment because of all the awesomeness and heart-wrenching scenes, and also because it took me a while to get into it. The beginning seemed kind of monotonous to me. They get captured, then they escape, then they get captured, then they escape, then they get captured, then they escape... But what kept me going of course, were the well developed characters and the amazing dynamic between Jake and Sebastian. My gosh, they have got to be the best slash pairing I've ever read on this site, and I've read a lot of slash stories. The story really picks up when they go to Edranks and get Riley.

Ok, there is so much I want to say about this story but I can't remember it all. I love all the witty banter between everyone. Sarcasm can get old after a while but it never does in this story, everyone is just hilarious. I love Riley, he has the best one-liners and he is such a sweetheart. Surprisingly, I think he was my favorite character. I kind of was hoping for a slight romance between him and Sebastian, but alas, Sebastian could only ever belong to Jake.

You created such an amazing universe. I haven't read any of your other stories yet, but I'm gonna go ahead and say this is your magnum opus. Also, I love Sebastian's love for his ship. In fact, they might be the story's one true couple. The way the characters just spend their time flying around in their spaceship and planet-hopping reminds me a lot of the Ender's Game series where Ender and his sister Valentine do the same. How I wish I could live in the future, riding around on my own spaceship.

On another note, it makes me sad that Jake never tells Sebastian he loves him back. I feel like Sebastian loves Jake more than Jake loves him. But then again, Jake is the one who pursued him, and he's not good at expressing his feelings, so I don't know. I just wish he could say the words, because I love Sebastian. He's just so adorable and tortured.

Okay, that's enough rambling for now. Thanks for writing such an amazing story!

Ahh! Sorry I accidentally hit send on my last review before I was done typing... Anywho so it was a little awkward at parts but mostly because I read this on my phone and I read some of the scenes between Jacob and sensation while I was in te car with my brother (whose name is also Jacob :3). Haha but really i loved this story!

Wow. That was amazing! You come up with the funniest thing for you characters to say! I loved all the little things you put in there and it was so awesome when you had the four stories going at once and then had them all connect. Man you are a amazing writer!

Although a few parts were a little awkward but m

Wow. That was amazing! You come up with the funniest thing for you characters to say! I loved all the little things you put in there and it was so awesome when you had the four stories going at once and then had them all connect. Man you are a amazing writer!

Although a few parts were a little awkward but m

i have only gotten but so far into this story and i have to say u are one of the most awsome writers i hav seen so far. i love characters and jakes cleverness. this story had me crying with laughter on more than one occasion. you should really hav waaaay more reviews than this... but i will be getting every person i kno (AND SOME WHO DONT) enjoy slash to read this story bc it is absolutely FANTASTIC!

i read the whole story in like two sittings, with a few hours of sleep, fewer hours of raid in world of warcraft, half a chocolate bar and numerous mugs of tea in-between. and i was starting to think i had a distinct inability to concentate for time long enough to read through even a few chapters of any book. there just was something not quite right with the books i choose, i guess. or you may be just that good ;)

I just read this entire fic for the second time, which is a very, very rare occurrence for me. Truthfully, I do not understand why this has so few reviews - it's better than 99% of the other stuff on this site. You actually show instead of tell! And you reference real literature! And your metaphors are funny enough to induce painful spasms and strange looks from passing family members and pets!(And you name space ships after characters from books by Gabriel Garcia Marquez. Swoon.) In short, you are fantastic, please keep writing. I don't even care what you write, just keep spouting words and I'll be happy.

ok, this was too awesome for words! i don't know how many times it had me laughing out loud. when i thought the story was about to end - WHAM! the next thing happened xD the characters were just..amazing and they were real, it felt like i knew them )and they evolved so much throughout the story!

i was glad every time jacob and sebastian broke up (i always hope for the couple to break up, i'm weird like that..) and was just as happy when they got back together again. but sebastian really pissed me off sometimes, when he thought jake was a monster, though i kind of almost agreed a tiny little bit after marietta or whatever she was called..

i must say i was very surprised what with jake being a prince, or at least a real one p espescially after the false deity thing with delilah.

i really do hope that riley got to know about jakob being alive eventually though..?

and i must say i was a bit surprised, i kinda thought delilah was going to end up with marl ;)

thank you for an amazing read, it made my (two) day(s)!

I must admit, at first I wasn't sure about this story, the characters dialogue sometimes feels forced, more in the earlier chapters then the later ones, and there are endless spelling mistakes throughout.

Having said that, I am really glad I stuck with the story. It's not one of the best I've read, but if you want a light and clever scyfy read, then this wont disappoint, in fact, if you're like me, you'll wish it didn't end so soon... and that is a accomplishment after 37 chapters! :D

Loved it.

Oh, how I would curse up a storm right now if I weren't so adamant on changing my ways and keeping a cleaner mouth on hand... er... face.

Even so, DIRTY WORDS!

This anger, my dear writer, has nothing to do with you at all. Well, a little bit - for being such an inspirational and awesome writer. But mostly for the stupid firewalls on the Internet connection that is BLOCKING ME very DETERMINEDLY from reading chapter six. Apparently you write Portuguese porn, legal drug and alcohol abuse, gambling, sports, news, violence, warez and... weapons. Did you know that? According to my block, that's what you do.

I don't know WHY it didn't block me a couple chapters ago when courtesans and drugs were ACTUALLY in play, but hey, the Internet provider works in strange, mysterious ways.

But yeah. I didn't really come to say any of that, but random things just escape my mouth.

I think this is possibly the first time I've ever had to put something on hold because I couldn't read it at that very moment. School-life excluded, because homework - duh. I am frustrated, I am annoyed, I am going to wait until I can actually read chapter six before I move on to seven and the rest of the story. This is making me moody. Grr.

You write really, really, really well. I've noticed a couple of errors in grammar where words that should be in sentences are absent, making for funny phrases. "She opened her wide, and said-" etc... Other than that, I am very, veery impressed with your story, and am veery, veery impatient to keep reading.

YOU ARE SUCH AN INSPIRATION. You make me want to write. Perhaps I shall. Eventually. But until then - traa!

Have a lovely life!

Thanks for the read!

I really enjoyed this story! Very well-crafted, and your characters had me in stitches half the time (or wanting to smack my head against the wall, which is almost the same thing, right?) Thanks for the great read!

I loved this story so hard core you have no idea. It makes me ridiculously sad that more people haven't read it. It's absolutely brilliant and perfect and asdogiadogisdf. Thank you for writing it.