Holy fuck this is absolutely awesome! Rarely have I laughed so much reading a story. You blend just the right amount of crack, fun, and seriousness and the result is absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for posting! :) :) :)

That was great! I got hooked from the first chapter and loved the story the characters and everything! I think you did pretty well in the way that most of the things that at some point looked a little doubtful were later on explained. Like every time Delilah could understand someone or so I was wondering why and later on there was always an explanation... I really like that in a story because it seems that often authors forget traits they've given their characters or past happenings...

I also loved the witty conversations and there were a few times it got me to laugh aloud (that doesn't happen ever)...

So anyway thanks for this wonderful story!

i still realy like this story

but i have to wonder

Does jakob like sebastian or not? because he's a major playboy

ah, its 2 o'clock in the morning

and im exhausted

but i can't go to sleep

i have to know what happens next

great job on the chapter

i must say, this seems very interesting

but i do wonder where you came up with the name Sebastian Strange?

but very good first chapter

Okay...LOVE the ending except for one thing that really really should be addressed in an epilogue. (yes - I want to guilt you into it! heh!)

POOR RILEY!

Okay, after all his cuteness and lovable attitude, he needs to be let off the hook for Jake's "death". Please! It makes me just want to hug him and slap Jacob silly.

I really enjoyed your story! Thanks SO MUCH!

Yuo had me way, way too worried there. Anyway, I'm glad it ended happy-I'm a complete schmuck for happy endings, and I loved the story. A lot. I'm already wanting to read it again. I'll keep an eye out for side stories/epilogues/extra-scenes, because I seriously do love this story. Thanks for posting it!

AW . . . closure. Thanks for a wonderful story!

I finished reading this in a week, two days where I didn't sleep at all, and it was so well worth it.

Oh no you didn't!

AH!

*LOL* I'm WAY too into this story...

NO! What a place to end the chapter! Now I'm worried-you can't fix this with an induced dream like you did Sebastian's supposed death! (Can you?) I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter to see what happens. And in Chapter 35, I had to laugh at Sebastian's comment to Delilah regarding a-kicking! I'm still laughing! All in all, this is a roller-coaster of a story.

Heheh! I love the open letter to the braincell. You are such a creative writer. No, I'm not kissing your ass to make you write more. You obviously don't need the incentive.)

This story just continues to enthrall me! I love it and I'm going to miss it when it comes to a conclusion. I am kind of hoping for some sequels. I'd really love to not let go of these characters for a while...

Thanks again for sharing your vision with us!

And for the laughs...especially those.

Oh noes!

I love Riley and Delilah. I can imagine them together causing chaos throughout the galaxies...

Another wonderful update. Thanks bunches again!

I swear if you updated 300 chapters in a day, I would kill myself attempting to read them all in one night. Anyways, love the story and the quick updates! Really wanting to see how this turns out. Update when you can. :)

At the moment, this is my favorite story on fictionpres. It's different from anything else I've read. Original, and extremely entertaining. I found it last night, and I was honestly VERY ANGRY at this story for keeping me up until three in the morning. Seriously, I kept planning to stop and go sleep at the end of the chapter, and then... I wouldn't. Or couldn't. Anyway: I love this story, I love your writing, and I will cry if you abandon it. Update when you can, and thank you very much for putting it up!