Reviews for You're Proven Wrong
Rs4YrTrbl chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Yes, it is true. It reminds me about how people fear going into Churches, or doing anything bad in churches...
MySatiah chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I loved this little poem. You have a wonderful argument, your writing was fluid, and the last couple of lines are going to be stuck in my head all day. They're so truthful. :)
iloveyou11 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
That was great. The argument of your poem is so good.
brave chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
i like this, you make a very good point. very well done.
lymli chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
I love the last line since it's very true, though people could hate who you are.
YoursInDemigodishness chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
very, very true. It's something people who hate God, wouldn't admit. I loved it. It's a brilliant poem, very brilliant. And also very well written.