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Reviews for
The Sun and the Moon
Daytime Werewolf
chapter 1 .
8/31/2010
Very good. I liked the contrast between the two
lymli
chapter 1 .
8/29/2010
it's interesting. I like this part:
The sun pretends he's all-knowing,
Making us believe his lies,