Reviews for Red Lights
Punslinger chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
This song has a nice beat-at least in my head as I read the lyrics. It would be nice to hear it set to music. So much depends on performance in music that it's hard to separate a work of art from the artist.
Tapioooca chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
"God is still watching,

Through a microscope."

Wonderful imagery! I really liked the poem in its entirety, but those lines definitely stand out for me.

I was right; your writing is good! ;)

- Tapioca
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
When your muse calls, listen even if it is at 2 am. Some of the best work comes at 2am. Lately, your work has been reminding ALOT of country music. (alternitave country music not sterotypical country music) Maybe it's just bc I've been listening to lots of Ryan Bingham (he won an Oscar for best music) or just because for no reason at all this really strikes me as country music. And I'm really in the mood for it.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Really pretty song! :D