Reviews for Be Careful What You Wish For |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AW. Can't the chapters be longer. lol. I love your story. Cna't wait until the next chapter. Do update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i already reviewed but i want to read more so i don't want you stop because it would make me sad and depressed. i really like the name nathan i've used it in my stories. i was also wondering if you could read one of my stories. anyway i hope you keep on writing this story i'm hooked and want to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! u updated lol nathan is so sweet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() O! This chapter was super cutee dude! Hahahaa. But for some reason I feel as if Nathan's messing with her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's quite good but the chapters need to be longer :) i like the storyline :) one thing that you could improve though is increasing the amount of things in a chapter like talk more about what she's thinking and stuff. if you have time please review my story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nathan sounds so cute when he tries so hard. Good luck with future chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! the story is cute! upload I badly want to read more! an please if you get he chance read my story its also a romance. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really liked it. i think you should keep going. i hope you put more chapters up :D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really the plot of the story so far keep writing ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, good start. A few mistakes here and their, but I liked it. Might want to do longer chapters though. I look forward to this continuing ) |