Haha, this is new. Shortest Chapters EVER lol

hahaha m...how can i say this...it sounds like the stories people would share when really really bored in pe- and see, in my pe class, the stories people tell are some seriously funny stuff. i liked the first chapter...the last line. cracked me up. :)

wtf? hahaha shortest chapters i've ever seen, nate. write them longer next time xD

Do your elves clean your room? Mine just steal my homework.

Hahaha...

No, seriously, you should write them longer :o

Can you do one on parkour? :P

Lol, probably the shortest chapter I've ever seen on FP.

You should write them longer ;P

I'm proud of you (for winning the game).

I won't call you a dumbass, but that was kind of extreme to win a game of trivia...

You seem like you have a knack for storytelling; I look forward to reading your future work.

hahahaha worth the read. that last line cracked me up. congrats on winning the trivia smart one xD

That really is stupid :D

Lol.