Reviews for Beyond Closed Doors
KillaCupcakes chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
To be honest, I didn't even read the story because I couldn't get past the names. If Zoi is pronounced "Zoey" and Arik is pronounced "Eric," just call the characters Zoey and Eric. Seriously, the "unique" spelling or whatever you were going for is unnecessary and distracting.
inreallife chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
As of right now, I'm really hoping you expand on the Zoi character a little more. She is clearly troubled, but you have created such a wealth of potential for her. Don't forget, the best characters sometimes come out of tried and true stereotypes! The loner goth girl could easily become a very interesting person. Remember to spend time on description and character developement, not just on plot!

You're off to a great start.-Steven